after a long, hard, hot day at the office
i just want to lose my briefcase and
flip
off my shoes
p
e
e
l
off my dress
and then…
But you’re home. And you’re watching tv with a beer
The condensation drip
ping
from the edge of your bottle onto your white boxers as you
tip
it in my direction in a gesture of negligent cheers
there was a day, long a go when it was you coming home
all wet from the
rain
and i, lounging with my white wine on the couch in your boxers and nothing
else
your umbrella drip drip dripping on the floor unheeded because…
there are better things to do
always
Busy things to do and not enough drip
ping
After a long,
hard,
hot
day.
Reblogged this on eroticapoetica and commented:
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Thanks for the re-blog. π
sorry that was so weird; it got reblogged in my purse unbeknownst to me
I did wonder what Fceffbfu meant. Haha! No problem.
I think it’s a new way to say Great poem!!! Only thing I thought about was when I lived with my girlfriend she didn’t have a job the entire time we were together. I spent most of my time working crazy shifts to support us in this wacky thing we were doing. I don’t know if those are the kind of memories you want pumping into someones mind, but it’s what I got.
Haha! Thanks, Wes. π
To me, poetry is whatever you make of it. However it relates to your life, it’s right. Just the fact that it relates is a great compliment! π
Hey don’t pat yourself on the back, you made me remember the awful women. I’m not happy at you for that lmao π
I didn’t say it had to relate to your life in a positive way… did I? hehe
The next installment of Second Seat is coming up in 10 minutes. Maybe that’ll take your mind off your woes. π
Love the way this flows!
Thank you, Chris. π
I loved this and that is all!
very nicely done. so poetic, yet seems so unapologetically realistic at the same time.
Thanks very much, Rudy. π