JusJoJan the 20th – Surreptitiously, a 50-word story

You preen and promenade your way ’round town, your ego ejaculating from you like a sprinkler on a rainy day; useless and no one wants it. You smile as I watch you overtly. Yet surreptitiously I study you, striving to catch you with my magnifying glass in the sizzling sunlight.

JJJ 2016

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5 thoughts on “JusJoJan the 20th – Surreptitiously, a 50-word story

  1. Absolutely perfect. Sooo good.
    “your ego ejaculating from you like a sprinkler on a rainy day.” So descriptive; I know folks like that I’d chase with a magnifying glass, too.
    Let me know if you catch them up.

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